Intro

Slums are terrible places in this world. Slums usually surround large cities and are low income areas, and are usually very crowded and dirty. It's kind of like the "ghetto". Slums need to be cleaned up because they are the source of crime in some cities, they are a health hazard to it's inhabitants, and they just make rich people richer.

outline

intro-slum def.
-thesis
paragraph 1-slums are sometimes the source of crime in some cities
-people are poor and must resort to theft ND CRIMINAL ACTS
-"a gang of wild-looking children"
-slums are a dangerous place but not only because of criminals
paragraph2-slums are health hazards to its inhabitants
-slums are unhygenic and a health hazard
-"thats urine"
-the people in slums need clean water and food and must turn to unfair deals from rich snobs...
paragraph 3-slums make the rich richer, sounds odd but true
-rich people hire slumdwellers to be butlers maids and yardworkers with very little pay for them and potentially their family
conclusion-the reasons that slums must be cleaned up are because they are...(thesis)
-in the end the world must band together to help people i slums and clean them up for a better place to live.

Thesis

Slums eed to be cleaned up because they are the source of crime in some cities, they are a health hazard, and because they make the rich richer.