outline

intro-slum def.
-thesis
paragraph 1-slums are sometimes the source of crime in some cities
-people are poor and must resort to theft ND CRIMINAL ACTS
-"a gang of wild-looking children"
-slums are a dangerous place but not only because of criminals
paragraph2-slums are health hazards to its inhabitants
-slums are unhygenic and a health hazard
-"thats urine"
-the people in slums need clean water and food and must turn to unfair deals from rich snobs...
paragraph 3-slums make the rich richer, sounds odd but true
-rich people hire slumdwellers to be butlers maids and yardworkers with very little pay for them and potentially their family
conclusion-the reasons that slums must be cleaned up are because they are...(thesis)
-in the end the world must band together to help people i slums and clean them up for a better place to live.